looking for feedback

i been doing some recording for almost 3 years now and have been playing guitar for about that long as well and just looking for some feedback. im looking for people to hook up with if this music is interesting to anybody heres the link:


www.myspace.com/jakeporetto

'lone wolf' - cool idea, the wolf in the background could do with being just a little more forward in the mix, and it needs a bit more going on, it got a bit repetetive. I also felt it went off beat occasionally - maybe you meant that.

'internal' I really did like - tone, feel and structure all very good. The phrases in the middle reminded me of something/someone but I can't place it... :confused:

yeah lone wolf i didn;t know what else to do with, i had a version with a solo but didn;t really like it over time, got any ideas? yeah i think internal is one of my favs

I like the tone of the tune and the structure. However, there's a timing problem that keeps throwing me off. Almost like the drums are outa sync with the guitar.
the only other thing I'd do is add more dynamics to the playing so that it builds in various parts of the song rather than going along at the same pace.

The tune is well done though... it just need refining and worked on for a few weeks as well as mastering.

thank you for your ears and i will work to improve this :)