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couleeridge
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couleeridge
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07/05/2007 9:02 pm
[U]Untitled[/U]

Words and names plastered to my face,
None which are my own,
All my broken hopes and dreams,
Have left out the window.

Theres no fear in sight,
I'm gonna be alright,
As long as your here with me,
I'll be just fine.

Chorus:
Whe you look into my eyes,
I know i'll be set free,
From all my cares and worries,
That always seem to bother me.
*Nothing can go wrong, it seems oh so right,
Nothing can ruin my night tonight.*

Every stereotype is just someone,
Telling me who they think I am,
But that don't matter to me,
'Cause I know who I wanna be,

When I see you smilin' at me,
I know that your oh so proud of me,
You support me for me,
'Cause you love me.

Chorus




End.
**This is pretty much my 1st song, so i'm not that good yet. If anyone wants to see more, just say. Thanks everyone**
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