First of all, sorry it took me so long.....I hardly ever check out the songwriting section because it's kind of slow in terms of new stuff.

It has its moments, for sure. "Oh god what have you done, your special sons have split the world in two," "contribution schemes where fat cats get the cream," "Puppy eyes, visualise genocide happening without redemption"....those are all cool lines. Some of it comes across as too literal somehow, in my opinion.

But then, I find it hard to read lyrics that aren't in a super-tight rhythm. I'd love to hear this, if you have means of recording. You might want to PM me if you do, though...I don't check the Listening Post very often either. :p