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ilovekaity
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ilovekaity
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Joined: 06/03/07
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06/09/2007 2:12 am
MIXED UP

Everything is wrong
Then everything is right
Never know what you’ll get in
This craze called life

You hate everything
Then everything is loved
It’s all mixed up
And I’ve had enough

I wish everything would straighten out
So I could clear my head
I never saw it coming
So many tears unshed

It all seemed alive
But it was all dead
Many things I never knew
Are now being said

I wish everything would straighten out
So I could clear my head
I never saw it coming
So many tears unshed

I wish everything would straighten out
So I could clear my head
I never saw it coming
So many tears unshed

When things first start
You pretend to be so brave
As things go on
Fear will make you its slave

I wish everything would straighten out
So I could clear my head
I never saw it coming
So many tears unshed

I wish everything would straighten out
So I could clear my head


how i have it in my head is that the verse 1 and 3 are sang and 2 and 4 are screamed
and on the chorus (i wish everything would ....) the first part of each line is sang and the last 3 sylables are screamed