If You Only Knew

Hey, this is a song that I wrote and recorded with my band quite some time ago actually. Although, this one actually stuck over time as most songs do not. Anyone who has recorded knows what I mean. Well, It's an original song called "If You Only knew" and I just wanted to know what you guys think. I'm up for some critisism, and will not flip out, as critisism is what makes us better. Don't be a jerk though. :D

"If You Only Knew"

hope you like it.

i love it

dude i love the beat...i like how it had a tinge of electronic stuff in it as well...the vocals fit perfectly...simple electric guitar runs just adds to the effect..im diggin it bro im diggin it keep it up

Thanks. We wrote like 10 songs, and this has been by far our best, not to say the others were bad, but you know. The funny thing is I have no idea what possesed me to play that run that leads into the "chorus" section. One of those....."how the hell did I do that" kind of things. :D

I like it.