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ravenx495
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ravenx495
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05/19/2007 10:08 pm
Originally Posted by: Drew77
By just sitting down in a meadow
The curse will not lift forever

why not...

By just sitting down in a meadow
That curse will not lift forever

However changing "the" to "that" is just an example of how changing one simple word can help.


Or maybe even "this" curse will not lift forever?

Thanx for da help
Like a phoenix rising from the flames...

...so shall the epic journey unfold as we discover our ancient future and craft legends through fire and flight.

This is a night of trance...