Originally Posted by: earthman buckI'm starting to get your style of writing now. It's quite enjoyable.

That said, I didn't understand his happiness at the end. But don't explain it just yet, I wanna re-read it sometime in the next couple days.


Really liked that. Made it seem like we readers were living it. I almost didn't get it, but then I did.


This one I didn't get. What the hell does it say? "Look see the real?"

Look and see the real now, I've italicized it to make that easier. Also, he's unhappy at the end. He's content because he actually realizes how he feels.