a song not so depressing


ravenx495
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ravenx495
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05/07/2007 11:03 pm
everyone knows i have a history of writing depressing songs that are sick and twisted. So I wrote this song to get over that stage and just write whatever I feel like, and I'm feeling good right now. So here it is, a plain old rock song:

The Last King of Men
Raven Xalus

Talk to me you are my last leader
Tell me what to do I want to obey
The brink of war and destruction is on our doorstep
I don't want to fall so easily and I'm not okay

You're the last king of men
Don't let this war turn your life into death
You're the last king of men
Don't try to run cause you're the only thing left

Born to die we are dying to know
Before we pass are you ready to rock and roll?
We got to fight for the rest of our lives
And if we don't the devil will terrorize

You're the last king of men
The sun is bright and it shines off your sword
You're the last king of men
We do what you say cause you're my king and my lord

Don't try to run from your destiny
It'll be a regret I guarentee
Forge the sword and slay the dragon and bring
Hope to this kingdom and set us free

Can you see that we are slowly dying?
You must stand before the end finally comes for us
Nothing seems to motivate you
We need to defeat the enemy break through the line

You're the last king of men
Don't let this war turn your life into death
You're the last king of men
Don't try to run cause you're the only thing left

You're the last king of men
C'mon fight it and don't let this war turn your life into death
You're the last king of men
Don't try to run just stand up and confess

P.S. This is not a christian song
Like a phoenix rising from the flames...

...so shall the epic journey unfold as we discover our ancient future and craft legends through fire and flight.

This is a night of trance...
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ericthecableguy
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ericthecableguy
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05/08/2007 2:17 am
Ha, it does sound like a christian song.
Its reminds me of rush.
Its quite alright.

I must admit, im pretty impressed with the amount of writing you're doing. Even though most of it isn't my style, if practise makes perfect, you'll be great someday.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.

METOOB
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