Thanks for checking it out guys.

Rockonn: Yeah, I know it's not really metal. It was an attempt at humor since it's harder than what I usually do but it's good to hear others thing it has potential.

z0s0_jp: Good to here you like the tone. I actually like the tone you get out of your rig and was aiming in that direction. I think my tone on this needs work but I at least think it's good start now and I can tweak it.

Like i said it's just some ideas, Rhythm patterns that need to be worked and arranged into something complete. I'm only putting it out there to get feedback (like you guys gave) to help me try and make it into something complete at some point. Like a band would do. I came up with an idea and you guys here, the band so to speak, help mold it.