god...can i get a LITTLE feedback please???? free rep to those who give me some pointers and critisism (spelling?) and praise and **** like that, not just "real good kid, keep writing...." god this post has been up for weeks!

okay, maybe not weeks, at least one week. But guys....

I NEEEEEEEEEEED SOME FEEDBACK!!! I GO CRAZY WITHOUT IT!!!!
Oh yeah, just so u no, this song is melodic death metal. I'm planning on posting it in the listening post when i can record again.

Ya, go ahead and think that i think the world revolves around me, but tell me what you think of the dang song!!!