I think you hit the sick and twisted death metal thing right on the head. Its a well written song with some good thought applied. My only thing is, the halocaust is a pretty touchy subject. I mean, millions of people were murdered. Its no joke, its no gross scenario you made up. It actually happened. Could come off as offensive. Just a thought...
Let your soul shine. Its better than sunshine. Its better than moonshine. Damn sure better than rain.