I wrote a similar one years back when I was feeling sorry for myself over a bitch. Then as I wrote it I realized how stupid I sounded and actally wrote a pretty cool tune in d flat
Twisted. Copyright 1994 Funkn' little groove music
I think it's time, for you to take a stand
Show a little backbone, and prove you are a man
Hold fast to your ideas, be strong in your mind
Is it what you're looking for?
Is it that hard to find?
Twisted!
(it doesn't have to be this way)
Twisted!
(It's right there in your face!)
Twisted!
(If you look then you will find)
Twisted!
(It was right there all the time)
Sighing in the darkness, contemplating death
But is it really bad enough, to take your dying breath?
Lookinn' to your fun'ral, will anyone be there?
Was it really love?
Do you really care?
Rpt chourus
Interlude (d flat/E)
Gtr solo#1(Emin/phrygian))
Modulate up a min 3rd
Gtr solo #2(gmin/phrygian) mods back to eflat
chourus , fade out :D Hugs dude!