Originally Posted by: ravenx495Or do you think I should forget the entire idea of putting Satan into my songs.

Frankly....yeah. It's been done waaaay too much.

I don't think it needs rearranging. It seems pretty clear to me that it's made to sound like Satan has control over this person and it's an awful thing.

But if your dudes don't want to play it, that clinches it: Satan-metal is not for you. Try writing about something that isn't so parodic of itself. :)