oh man i am out of practice

here is my first try at recording something, in many years , it is sloppy but i liked how it fell together

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=683207

Not bad. Some good playing. I think it could be better if there where some breaks. The guitars go non stop making it feel cluttered I guess. I think you need some stops to let people breath and add some emotion to it. It's blues.

You also might try doing a kind of dueling guitar licks with the left channel battling the right channel. Quick riff on the left and then a quick counter lick to the right. Back and forth and by the end they converge. Just some ideas to mess with. :cool:

thank you , actually it was two blind passes , when i went to decide which i prefered they both ran and i thought .. cool and just left it

Yep - Love it

thank you ,i was a bit timid about posting the link, as sloppy as it is