sleep well my child,
let memories shatter what your future holds
you dog, your insatiable hunger for power
I might change that verse because it seems irrelevant.
I think you should include the title somewhere in the song... if you didn't mean for it to be the first line, that'd be a good place to put it perhaps. Not that it really matters if the title is in a song or not, but because I think it is a good line.
Good work, now lets go roll a cigarette and throw back a few cold ones... all john wayne like.
