Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonI caught it too. I'm SO busy, but I promise to TRY as best I can to come back with some feedback as to how you can satirize the genre more effectively.

I appreciate the thought, but you needn't bother. As long as we are constantly writing and give new things a try from time to time, our teacher is happy. I wrote this story to make myself laugh, and also to stop myself from surfing GT.

Stay tuned, everyone. Tomorrow I'm gonna write a western.