New song


celitus
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celitus
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03/19/2007 1:38 am
I hope to get this recorded song but anyway here's what I came up with, I was trying for a simple piano only song, so tell me what you think please!

She lies upon the grass at midday
wishing it was night and her worries were away
As the sun is shining above
She drifts away
thinking how she lost everything that she loved

over the mountains,
and far away he lies awake and dreams
He wants to be near her
He finds the memories of how she had once held him near
With tenderness and love soon she washed away his fears
He is lieing awake
Hoping to hear her song soon

Out with no reason
On a summers day, they went their seperate ways
Over the seasons
Slowly they turned to the shade

slowly time passes her by,
She loses track of day as she stares up to the sky
Painfull promises they made to keep
slowly tears fall from her eyes
Alone in a memory with no place to hide

He stares out the window
Over the trees and into moon
A feeling of sorrow covers him soon
Feeling all the warmth he had slowly slip away
Painfull promises they made to keep
slowly tears fall from his eyes
Alone in a memory with no place to hide

Out with no reason
On a summers day, they went their seperate ways
Over the seasons
Slowly they turned to the shade

Lost with no reason
they spend all their days, thinking of new ways
to let darkness cover their memories
To let them soon fall asleep.
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iiholly
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iiholly
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03/19/2007 3:44 am
I can dig it. Sort of has a country feeling.

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