I think this track is good Grizzly.

About the lyrics, that's up to you really. Write what you feel.

But I hardly ever listen to lyrics of songs, cos I can't hear it.
My ears tend to focus more on the music instead.

Back to the track, nice melody, not overly done in the solo. It gives me the feeling of that river your expressing where ever it is in this world ;)

But it seems to have that affect on me.

;) Keep 'em coming Grizzly