What do you guys thinks needs to be removed? I'm at least gonna leave the reverb. Perhaps the chorus and delay? Or just the chorus?

Edit: Just tried to remove it but can't for a few reasons out of my control now, so I may have to rerecord it sometime.

Here are the lyrics in case anyone was interested in what I was saying. They're a little different than this because I changed words as I got to certain parts to make them flow better.

Stomach occassionally grumbles
Joins the pitty party for me
My incoherent mumbles
Bout the status of my poverty

Unemployed and angry
With life and the fact that it sucks
Lookin for handouts of money
Always in need a few more bucks

Step up on the soap box
Preach about my dignity
Blamin everyone but myself
Deny the reality
Won't work here, can't do that
Too good to be a normal guy
Holding on to this "dignity"
Wishing everyone would comply

Why do they hesitate
To answer to my every demand
Been a slacker since I was born
Now they don't wanna hold my hand

Step up on the soap box
Preach about my dignity
Blamin everyone but myself
Deny the reality
Won't work here, can't do that
Too good to be a normal guy
Holding on to this "dignity"
Without the thought to even try