I don't really check out the Listening Post much, so I don't know what this comment is worth:

That is probably the best song I've ever heard posted on GT.*

The rhythm guitar reminded me a lot of "Down By the River" by Neil Young. The little lead bits fit very well. And actually, I think you have a pretty good voice. It's nice to hear someone once in a while that sounds like a real person but can still hold a tune.

I didn't think the lyrics were much to read, but with the music they fit very well and painted me quite the picture. Excellent job. :)

*Between that and Giant Fighting Robot, I dunnoooo....