Originally Posted by: acapellaTo be frank, I'm surprised you all liked this story so much. It seems to me like Brendon got an idea for a story, some good lines, realized he had no actual plot, and made it as quick as possible. It just seems lazy to me. I didn't know that laziness was a style, not to mention a particularly tricky one.

Now you see why it's tricky though. He only comes through with it at a few points. However, this is a few points more than his other stories, which had only one or two diamonds in the rough, as far as really powerful lines were concerned.