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Jolly McJollyson
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Jolly McJollyson
Chick Magnet
Joined: 09/07/03
Posts: 5,457
01/23/2007 11:57 pm
Here's the more-or-less first draft of a poem I wrote today:

Trapped,
like a phoenix,
a small boy flares into a small man.

A small man,
sitting in the dark,
cutting scrapbook photo albums
of the small boy.

Birthday cake, baby clothes, baseball caps,
kindergarten, middle school, limo ride on prom night.
Brother home from college, a brace of smiles, newfound open conversation.

Seeing him off
for the return to school.

The phone call.

The funeral.

Twenty years later,
a small man
lets fall a phoenix tear
onto the page

as a decades-gone brother
wonders why he hadn't told him more often
to be strong:
that he loved him.
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...