i ramble, but i hope u like it


g----rant
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g----rant
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01/19/2007 3:57 pm
i can't make up my mind about this one...


i'm the guy in the corner
head in the sand
never stuck my neck out
and leave my head's future to chance

you run with another crowd
never looked twice at me
you'd rather the aryan
than me

i let you fall on my shoulder
bury your face in my sleeve
you let me tell you its alright
but won't let me be your next guy.
coz i'm always on the side
i'll catch you again and again
you let me be your rock
but you won't let me be your man.

i've heard love is wisdom in action
it's the inner substance in light
it's all that is, knows nothing but love
all that is, it transcends the mind

your mind transcends me
and moves on to others
i'm there to take your heart
pick up the pieces

i let you fall on my shoulder
bury your face in my sleeve
you let me tell you its alright
but won't let me be your next guy.
coz i'm always on the side
i'll catch you again and again
you let me be your rock
but you won't let me be your man.

feeling confused?
hard to choose?
hearts feeling bruised?
i'm here for you
but maybe i need you to be there for me
i'm just the head rest in a car seat
you can always fall back onto me

your mind transcends my love
and moves on to other faces
but i'm still there to pick up the pieces
when these guys take your heart and smash it

i let you fall on my shoulder
bury your face in my sleeve
you let me tell you its alright
but won't let me be your next guy.
coz i'm always on the side
i'll catch you again and again
you let me be your rock
but you won't let me be your man.


i dunno, this one sorta makes me feel like i'm rambling...it had many more words per line til recently, so just imagine...
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Scotttaylor72
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Scotttaylor72
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01/19/2007 5:36 pm
long ass song, but i like it!
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Kevin Taylor
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Kevin Taylor
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01/19/2007 5:40 pm
I like it... however, I'd have to hear the music along with it in order to form a proper opinion.
Ya gotta remember that lyrics are only as good as the music they're sung to.
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iiholly
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iiholly
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01/26/2007 2:00 am
Watch out for using cliche lines... unless you don't mind being cliche.

i've heard love is wisdom in action
it's the inner substance in light

your mind transcends my love
and moves on to other faces


Those are my two favorite lines in the songs.

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