Originally Posted by: hunter60Sorry I haven't had a chance to comment on your foray into poetry Jolly. I am hesitant to say much because I really know nothing, absolutely nothing, about poetry in any of it's forms.

I treat poetry the same way I treat art. I don't know what is technically good or bad but I know what appeals to me and what I like.

I like what you've done. It does what good writing is supposed to do. Create an emotional response in a person and your work does just that. **Applause, applause....**

Again, I am mightly impressed by your talent. :)

Haha, I've been wondering where you were!

To be honest, I posted this sonnet with you in mind; I thought you might get a kick out of the "Elegance is a lie" down the left side.