Originally Posted by: acapellaI don't like that line. And I don't you think you do either. :)

Well you made your point anyway. It's kind of a weird coincidence that I read "An Enigma" (or is it just "Enigma"?) by Egar Allan Poe today.

Question though, what's with all the different poems n' junk of late? Are you challenging yourself to write something in every fixed form there is?

I edited the poem, and changed that line.

I'm challenging myself with fixity, yes, but the big challenge of this poem is the hidden "ending" line on the left side:
"Elegance is a lie." Dunno if anyone noticed that, it's an acrostic sonnet.