The part i didn't dig was the ending. If it has to be a dream, i'd at least continue the story to either explain the dream, or work the dream into real life.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
