josh does poetry


jeffhx
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11/22/2006 8:20 am
pontius pilate

Rectify my futile inhibitions,
beware of my insidious tongue,
i have heard of this beat before,
this beat that has just begun...

Read my drunken solitude,
understand my aggressive engagement,
pluck that string, knock the beat,
feed me unrelentless aggrandizement...

Sing for me, write about me,
paint for me, dance because of me,
for i shall nourish you with contempt,
remember you must for i will not repent...

Shut those eyes,
ignore your mind,
listen to the leaves,
you'll see what you can find...

Liberation, self actualisation,
tears of wealth, moans of victory,
be sad you shall not,
for it is a day of an epiphany...

Now go sing about it,
hop upon it,
laugh because of it,
by all means brag about it...

...but never ever regret,
or dwell upon it...

Cheers,
Josh


was going thru some old stuff and bumped into this...which i really liked..tell me what u guys think
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11/22/2006 7:51 pm
Dude... that's amazing. :cool:
"It's all folk music... I ain't never heard no horse sing!"
- Attributed variously to Leadbelly and Louis Armstrong

If at first you don't succeed, you are obviously not Chuck Norris.

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Grambo
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11/23/2006 1:25 am
Very Deep.............Like it
if you always take the lazy route
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11/23/2006 3:03 am
thanks guys :)
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11/26/2006 5:27 am
It really made me smile at the end. I tip my hat to thee.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.

METOOB
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11/27/2006 1:03 pm
Originally Posted by: ericthecableguyIt really made me smile at the end. I tip my hat to thee.


thanks buddy
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