New Songs, Need Some Serious Crit

so ive recorded(very shoddily) 3 songs im working on at the moment for my new band up at music university. I need some harsh crit to see if people are even interested in the music i have to play, any crit on any of the 3 would be very very welcome!

http://media.putfile.com/The-First

http://media.putfile.com/Make-Sure-56

http://media.putfile.com/A-Second-is-Too-MuchDemo

thats them, thanks in advance for any of your time and ears!

cheers, sheepy

no one.........?

Overall, the music itself is very good! The only problem I have is with the singing, which sounds flat and a bit off-key at times. Work on that, and you'll have three awesome songs on your hands! :cool:

sorry dude , i tried them all but the players wouldnt work ! :(

Originally Posted by: middlezsorry dude , i tried them all but the players wouldnt work ! :(

Same here. The player wouldn't load and when I tried to download it I got..
"Status: Your are on page 1 of 10 before the download page. NEXT PAGE".

Sorry dude, ain't no way I'm wading through 10 pages.
Ya need to put em in MP3 format (preferably at 192kbps or higher) and make it as easy as possible for people to get to it. If possible, make it a direct link with .mp3 at the end so people can just open it in their own players or download it straight away.

Soundclick seems to have improved over the way it used to be so maybe try them if you don't want to pay for your own FTP server space.

I agree that the singing was off at times. Great melodies and songwriting besides that. :)

I thought all 3 songs where pretty good. The recording hurts it a lot and the singing is pitchy but I have heard a lot worse vocally on stage. I think if this was live with the amps pounding you in the chest it would be great.