Maybe......
why
why must you
why must you be so crazy
evertime i say goodbye...
i am just leaving for a day or two
why do i
_________harder_________
hang on, falling on every day
falling on every blade, why don't I cry
so this is my last goodbye
i cant stand by ur side
with all these crazy goodbyes....
I really like the idea, felt like I needed more imagery to feel it...
Just ideas... use them if you like or maybe they'll just help you find your own. Hope you don't mind I took the liberty. Only did it cause I do like it.
S