Originally Posted by: earthman buck
There are things I much prefer,
like making puppets with my eyes

Brother pass the novocaine
the clouds are eating up the sky

I liked those parts. To be honest I didn't think you tried very hard on the rest, I mean the lyrics seem kind of...obvious? Too literal? I'm sure you know what I mean. But at any rate, as long as they fit with the music (which, of course, they do), we'll use it. The show's the day after tomorrow, dude.

Not trying to put down your song, just saying that you could do better and you know it.