Another one I didn't name

Here's one I wrote a couple of weeks ago. Even though I have music for this song, I don't think I'm physically able to play and sing it the way I imagine it, so it may very well go no further than this page. Hope ya like it.

To one who watches from afar
His Madness stands his autumn guard
The smell of death is on His hands
It mingles with forgotten plans

And as the world comes crashing
I hear a deep deep sigh
Call it a crime of passion
or an abcess on my mind
I am always chewing on a wound,
enjoying every second bite
and if the world won't follow through,
put a smile in a dead bird's eye

A flash of black into the night
and I thought the light was mine
Sometimes your thoughts hold true
Sometimes the emptiness is due

i think your choice of words are just super...its has great flow too....its a little short for a song but im sure you can work arnd it...i can imagine it sound really good acoustically...i sorta had this groove thing goin on in my head as i read...good stuff brendon...

Pretty cool song, Broseph.

Just curious, how many times are you going to use that abcess on my mind line before you finally stick with it?

Just great. Keep it up. :cool:

Originally Posted by: acapellaPretty cool song, Broseph.

Just curious, how many times are you going to use that abcess on my mind line before you finally stick with it?

Seeing as we ditched that other song I originally had it in, I decided it was fair game to put it in this one. It doesn't fit as well as the other song, but that music was just terrible.