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Andrew Sa
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Andrew Sa
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09/19/2006 5:08 pm
Originally Posted by: guitarfreak141 YOU want changed, which I highly agree with,


I know its petty, but I'd change that line. You can not end a sentence with a preposition...EVER! I know most kids wont notice, but if I was in the audience, I would certainly make a note of that,and it would alter my vote...

simply " with which I strongly agree" would do,or something to that effect.
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