I suck, and I'll probably always suck, but if ever stop sucking, and start talking about how good I am all the time, I encourage you to punch me in the head.
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Not something I would find myself writing, but I actually like the flow quite a bit. For some reason that last line "and her decision fades into the crowd" doesn't jive with me though.. "her destiny fades into the crowd" or something maybe? Heh.. just my $.02, but I liked it.