Originally Posted by: AkiraCrazy laughing, beat comes in, looking cool so far, :cool: , vocals come in... =/.

There's my real time analysis. I think the tune is cool, but the vocals need more "umph", if you will.

Anyway, happy Schmagina Day! :D

Edit: Sweet solo, love the way the last melody carries on through the rest of the song.

Any of you guys into helping me with some advice on the new vocal tracks I come up with this afternoon?
I'm gonna record a couple of test vocals but need some outside opinions on whether they're cheezy or not. For now I'm just gonna do single takes to get a feel for what style fits the song...and especially if I need to add more personality or feel into the vocals.
Either that or if I'm going overboard and sounding like a dork.

Anyways... I'll post a couple of takes later this aft so if any;body want's to comment, lemme know.