Ok, I think I am done with this, Mix 3 is up at the top.

Mix 3 changes:
Deleted electric guitar clean acoustic sounding rythym tracks.

Added a real acoustic guitar, sounds way better. It's my Tacoma road king with fresh strings.

Added a big scream at 1:25 as per several request.

Adjusted levels up and down all over the place.

Thanks to all who helped me dial this in.