armies of barbies

armies of barbies,
blow of their heads,
what are they for?
prisoners of war
tie em to rockets
light em at parties

what do you do when you got a stalker
staring at you from the footbal guy's locker
the centerfold stares through me, at the suckers
regardless of weather or not they want her
shes stuck on the wall, flat and silent, but shes still a talker
she says somthing about beauty and eating disorders
if she moves from that pose, cosmo might drop her
theyre growing armies of barbies and i think we should leave her

so wat do u peeps think?

Interesting, I like the subtle innuendo towards the effect of our culture's society on women (especially teens).

yep, going for somthing on thoes lines. ill put it up on the lisening post soon

I love it! It's great.

Aside from some spelling mistakes it seems pretty good. I would have used different word choice to make the song less literal, but that's just me. Maybe you were going for literal.

I loved this line:
shes stuck on the wall, flat and silent, but shes still a talker
I also liked this one:
if she moves from that pose, cosmo might drop her
But I think you should change this one:
theyre growing armies of barbies and i think we should leave her
"Growing" and "leave her" kind of stick out as not belonging there.

You have some good stuff there, keep working on it.

i just put that last one in there cuz i couldnt think of anything, but thanks guys