Catching Up

You're my favourite, you're my shame
Takes so much just to say your name
We have so much fun when we're alone
And we pretend nobody knows

And now you're drawing me out (how could you hope to make it out?)
The end is what it's all about
I think I'll just stay inside (I think you better run and hide)
I think this is where I deny you

You open doors and beg for more
We are waiting for the end
Quiet, calm, deadly bomb, yeah
But we know it's all pretend

And now you're drawing me out (how could you hope to make it out?)
The end is what it's all about
I think I'll just stay inside (I think you better run and hide)
I think this is where I defy you

Her heart is blackened with decay
Her love is poison, get away
Another flower blooms insane
The final score, a deadly game

i like it michael its cool and i like this line Her heart is blackened with decayHer love is poison, get away
its different and cool i guess idk but its a well writen song :)

As I was reading it... it seemed to build intensity. Kind seems like it would start out with a really clean sound... maybe some chorus effects... with a lot of arpeggio type guitar work for the first verse..... then build into a little heavier chorus... and a little dirtier for the second verse... a little heaveier for the second chorus... then kick it in real heavy for the last verse... That's just the way it sounded in my head anyway. Sounds good though. Not a whole lot of weak spots. nice

"Another flower blooms insane"

Awesome word choice, like that line.

Seems to me the song is about a booty call gone wrong.

Good work pumping more lyrics out.

Originally Posted by: aschlemanAs I was reading it... it seemed to build intensity. Kind seems like it would start out with a really clean sound... maybe some chorus effects... with a lot of arpeggio type guitar work for the first verse..... then build into a little heavier chorus... and a little dirtier for the second verse... a little heaveier for the second chorus... then kick it in real heavy for the last verse... That's just the way it sounded in my head anyway. Sounds good though. Not a whole lot of weak spots. nice

Man, that's amazing you'd say that. Chorus is my favourite effect, and I will undoubtedly chorus it up real nice-like music wise.

And that other stuff you said was how I imagine it'll turn out, too.

Good song, Michael.(you continually writing spotlight stealer, you)
In terms of lyrics, I think this is probably the best thing you've done yet.

Thanks all y'alls. aschleman, that's probably exactly how it will turn out. Weird. This is probably my favourite lyrics of mine, I think mainly because they create the illusion of actually being about something for once. That said, check out my new thread o' lyrics!