But... I did have an eerie experience while reading these lyrics. I was listening to "Comfortably Numb" by Pink Floyd while reading it... then the solo kicked in... and David Gilmours first solo seemed to weave itself into your words and equally convey your message... It was wierd... It was like David Gilmour was trying to say the same thing that you were... And together the point hit me like a ton of bricks... Just thought I'd share that...
The words are decent... a little strung out, but I feel that it conveys a message of confusion/sadness and an almost sense of giving up on yourself... I think the scatter-brain word and phrase choice work well with the message.
Like most lyrics that are posted on this site... they usually don't take their true form until there is music to go along with it. Maybe that's why David Gilmours solo helped me feel what you're feeling.
