"Always You"

This is a song I wrote that I haven't been able to write music for yet for some reason. It's kind of...different.

[U]Always You[/U]

You make a pretty corpse
A body fit for love
I wanna see you bleed
I wanna hear you screamin'
When you had enough
I wanna taste your fear
Broken on the ground
I wanna fell you heavin'
Underneath me
Before I take you down

I'm gonna take you down
And you can get me up
I'm gonna make you drown
Inside my love
I'm gonna take you down

Well you're the only one girl
You're not like all the rest
And night
After night
You pass the test
I went and picked you out
Just like every night
I wanna know why
You wanna know why
Every time

I'm gonna take you down
And you can get me up
I'm gonna make you drown
Inside my love
I'm gonna take you down
Like I always do
Well they may not always look it
But they're always you
I'm gonna take you down

You make a pretty corpse
A body fit for love
I wanna see you bleed
I wanna hear you screamin'
When you had enough
I wanna taste your fear
Broken on the ground
I wanna fell you heavin'
Underneath me
Before I take you down

I'm gonna take you down

good meter, but scary lyric.

dude i like its cool good job

Songs about stalkers are always fun! I have no complaints, some lines may be a little cliche... but nothing too bothersome. I could see the chorus getting stuck in my head if I heard it in song form.

I especially like the first two lines of the song and use of the word heaving.

Kudos.

Woops. Brendon pointed out a typo to me. Where it says "I wanna fell you", that should be "I wanna feel you". Sorry kids. :o

Here's the lyrics to "Time to Confess" by Warren Haynes:

Only the darkness can keep you warm
On an evil night like this
Are you looking for some one
To give your little arm a twist
Everybody needs some danger sometimes
I'm no different
Just think of me as your equal
I won't undress you
I won't hold you down
I won't stick a knife in your back
The way you did that clown

Can you feel it, can you taste it
Yeah, you must've seen it coming
Surely you could've guessed
The game is up
I'm gonna' take you down
No more crying
I think it's time to confess

You better pray for a miracle
Or you better pray this will never end
I, myself, can play the victim
I'll do whatever the part demands
You saw me watching you
You had time to run
Ain't it enough that you torture me
You had to go for his gun

Can you feel it, can you taste it
Yeah, you must've seen it coming
Surely you could've guessed
The game is up
I'm gonna' take you down
No more crying
I think it's time to confess

You won't see no bright lights burning
But you'll feel the heat
This is how it happens
When strangers turn to lovers turn to enemies

Can you feel it, can you taste it
Don't look at me that way
With that blood on your dress
The game is up
I'm gonna' take you down
No more crying
I think it's time to confess

Only the darkness can keep you warm

Your lyrics are good. When i can compare then to Warren Haynes, to me their good.

Thanks kenny. You're right, that song is kind of similar. Kind of freaky how it uses the same line, "I'm gonna take you down".

Also, me and Brendon wrote music for it tonight. Woot woot.

I don't know if you've ever heard any Stabbing Westward....... but it seems like that's what the song would kind of sound like to me. Good lyrics!