Originally Posted by: iihollyI like everything except:

Aunt Pauline is going far
in the back of a cop car
As I watch her drive away
I don't know just what to say

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[QUOTE=earthman buck]Well, I have all day of school with no real work to do, so I'll try and come up with something better.

Ok, it's been several days now, and still no changes. I don't like that part much either, but I like the story the way it is. The only alternative ending I would be satisfied with would be Aunt Pauline dying of a heart attack or something. Hmmm. I'll keep at it, I guess.