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The Mind Is A Terrible Think To Waste.
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06/19/2006 6:10 pm
New songs on GarageBand.com
BLACK ANGEL and NEGATIVE WORLD
www.garageband.com/artist/factorydamage
Please let us know what you think??? :D
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06/19/2006 6:48 pm
The music is good but the lyrics and the tone of his voice don't work for me.
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06/19/2006 7:14 pm
I'm with magic. for such a hardcore track, its kinda weird to have such a voice.

like having shakirah sing for slayer.
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06/19/2006 7:24 pm
Originally Posted by: pureI'm with magic. for such a hardcore track, its kinda weird to have such a voice.

like having shakirah sing for slayer.
Now thats Funny :D
Were kinda diffirent from the norm kind of a new style or sound. :cool:
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06/21/2006 11:53 am
Originally Posted by: magicninjaThe music is good but the lyrics and the tone of his voice don't work for me.
What do you think about Negative World its about a guy that wants to kill himself but keeps backing out.
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06/21/2006 11:58 am
Originally Posted by: magicninjaThe music is good but the lyrics and the tone of his voice don't work for me.
I wrote the lyrics to Black Angel, Its all about a guy with those mind-madding voices in his head telling him to do bad stuff all the time. :D
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06/29/2006 2:44 pm
Originally Posted by: DAMAGED ONENew songs on GarageBand.com
900 Subpoenas and NEGATIVE WORLD
www.garageband.com/artist/factorydamage
Please let us know what you think??? :D
Come on guys let me know what you think good or bad I can take it.
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06/29/2006 11:49 pm
Sweet Megadeth/Metallica type riffs.

Your singer sounds like a bad version of Dave Mustaine.
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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06/29/2006 11:51 pm
Originally Posted by: DAMAGED ONEWhat do you think about Negative World its about a guy that wants to kill himself but keeps backing out.

Subtlety is not in your vocabulary, is it?


Regardless, very cool Megadeth-esque song. But the lyrics are WAY too up front, man, throw something somewhat poetic in there. The melody RULES, though.
I want the bomb
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06/30/2006 12:57 pm
Thanks Jolly Point well taken. :D
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06/30/2006 2:47 pm
Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonSubtlety is not in your vocabulary, is it?


Regardless, very cool Megadeth-esque song. But the lyrics are WAY too up front, man, throw something somewhat poetic in there. The melody RULES, though.
Hey, You cant beat around the bush if you want to conveay a big message in a five minute song. :D
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06/30/2006 9:43 pm
Originally Posted by: DAMAGED ONEHey, You cant beat around the bush if you want to conveay a big message in a five minute song. :D

Hmmm... Touche.
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07/13/2006 12:51 pm
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07/13/2006 9:55 pm
You're band is pretty badass. Keep up the excellent metal style. You can definately tell the Mustaine-influence in your singer's voice. I loved the heavy riffs.... I'm 2:20 into Negative World and still waiting for a blistering solo....ahhh there's some tapping... Good tunes dude!
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07/14/2006 1:45 pm
Thanks Dude, Were trying to bring back and hold true to the metal music that has meaning and a message you know. Thats also not screaming all the time you can understand the lyrics and music and thats the thing thats missing in The Heavy Metal of today. Jack :cool:
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