Here are the words for two of my songs that, someday, you will hear. Tell me what you think.

[U]Spiral Down[/U]
Verse 1:
I can only do what
I can do to make it
Look like I'm doing
All I can for you
To think that I've improved
Over time
And I can only focus
On one thing so
I don't really care if
Everything is
Quite the way you hoped itwould be
Over time

Verse 2:
You can only do what's
Best for you and I
Wish that I could do the same
And I'll take everything
I love and watch it
Spiral down the drain

The chorus is just
Spiral Down (you spiral down)
Spiral Down (what more can I say)
Spiral Down (I spiral down)
Spiral Down (you throw it away)

The parts in brackets come in on the second and third chorus after four bars. It works. Then there's and ending thing that goes

When the dust is settled and gone
And when it all is said an done

Eye Candy

Verse 1:
You want to know just what I'll do
I want to know what is the truth
You want me, I don't know why
Eye candy, a sweet surprise

Verse 2
I want to know where will you go
You want to start but I'll take it slow
You want me back and I don't know why
Eye candy, a sweet surprise

Chorus:
You go away again, you go away and you leave me
You go away again, you come back, will you free me?
You gone away again, you go away and you relieve me
You go away again, are you comin' back, will you release me?

Both of these songs are very kick-ass, and when you hear them you will squeal in glee. We've worked together on them and they rock your socks off. I just want to know what you think of the words. If you like them or not though, trust me these are some rockin' tunes.