"We forgot to call Dylan" "Who the F*ck is Dylan?" "oh, I mean xDylanx" " oh yea we forgot to call him"
Originally Posted by: jiujitsu_jesusWell, you guys can certainly play. The doom-laden Lamb of God style stuff around the 1:20 mark was excellent, and I think I heard you hit a big juicy pinch harmonic around 1:24, which sounded great. I really liked the way you had the solo exploding out of the precision riffing section. It was a very good lead, in fact - your vibrato needs a little work, but you sure know how to bend!
I think this is begging for vocals, though - all the riffing and linear progressions by themselves for the full seven or so minutes became a bit tiresome. Even with them, you may find that it goes on a little too long for the average listener's tastes; you could probably shorten - or even sacrifice -the creepy guitar work towards the end. It's certainly got some potential to it. I look forward to hearing the finished product.
Good job! :)
Originally Posted by: Poontang_clanHAHA YESS your my favourite person on this forum