Originally Posted by: jiujitsu_jesus:cool: Nice one, Earthman. The last verse was particularly good.

I concur. The third verse is the only one I really like as it is. There are things that bother me in the first and second one, but I probably won't change those either, just for the sake of keeping it in its purest form. This was my first song, you see.

Thanks for the read, guys.