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guitarwylde03
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05/31/2006 4:05 pm
New song. It's not finished, but I want some opinions of where I should go with it from here. It's titled unfinished song.

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05/31/2006 5:15 pm
It seems about 10-15 bpm to slow. It does sound good especially the harmonization but it just seems a little to slow. Pick it up a bit and see what you think.
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05/31/2006 6:17 pm
That's exactly what I thought, but I thought I would see what someone else thought first.
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06/01/2006 1:48 am
These myspace player things never work for me :(
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06/01/2006 5:24 am
Interesting rhythm, I liked the way you wove it in with the beat. The harmonies and washes of lead were pretty cool as well. Good work, man. :)
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06/01/2006 12:17 pm
What rhythm are u talking about, is it the Killswitch Engage sounding part? I was just looking for a change, so it would be easier to transition into something new. I sped it up a bit and it sounds a lot better.
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06/02/2006 6:34 am
Originally Posted by: guitarwylde03What rhythm are u talking about, is it the Killswitch Engage sounding part?


Yeah, that one. Sorry. Me no brain... me like loud noise...
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- Attributed variously to Leadbelly and Louis Armstrong

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06/02/2006 2:48 pm
It's OK, everyone loves loud noises. LOUD NOISES!!!!

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