Originally Posted by: magicninjaSo I finally did mine eh?

Here ya go.

www.soundclick.com/magicninja

Hey man I just listened to yours, here's my review (for what it's worth):

+ Nice Licks throughout
+ Good Tone

- Lead guitar was a little quiet, and needed to be a bit more in the forefront. That can be fixed easily.
- Solo needed a bit more direction and dynamics, like maybe starting off low, and then reaching the high notes later on in the solo, to make it more interesting to the listener, rather than just going up and down all through.

All that said, you have the skills and the technique, I reckon you could do do yourself justice with a second take. Just plan the direction of the solo out a bit before you play, and remember you don't have to do the whole 3 minutes.