new song by urs truly

in my neverending quest to achieve guitar nirvana i have produced yet another song...called

magnolia in winter

Aargh, I wish I could listen to it, but my download limit is almost up for the month - I'll have to wait six days! :(

Wow...it's quite mesmerizing. It almost could have been on the film magnolia.

ermmm. the acoustic was out of tune, man. that killed it for me in some places. you can hear it in the areas you picked it out. and dont hit the mic. that never sounds too pretty. ;)

it kinda freaked me out. i dont know why. it really reminded me of this neighboorhood i drove thru to a show last night. and all the houses looked like something in one of my drawings. like, there was something realistic and believeable about them, but yet something unreal and weird. i dont know how to describe it really, but the chick that was riding with me felt the same way. it was weird.

so uh yeah. this song reminded me of that somehow? who knows.

yea it cudve gone out of tune at some points...but some were done intentionally too...it was kinda spontaneos, the whole thing...cheers for the comments guys...i will definitely need to focus more the mic thingy...cheers for the tip... oh yea and my playing too of course...and my voice...and my lyrics...and recording software...so yeah i gotta work on everything lol...the thing is when i get something done andnot good in quality..i just cant be bothered to redo it again lol... but thanks guys... :)

It's a nice idea but the timing is shaky at the beginning but it picks up fine towards the end.

Lots of odd noises there which may be deliberate.

Do you use a metronome or a click track 'cos if not it might be worth getting one.

"Walk Away" was good but you need a better recording as it's all a little indistinct.

Cheers

Dick

so then here it is again..some new stuff i came up with...reaaallly weird stuff...tell me what u guys reckon...its called 'i witnessed a ghost murderer'..

http://www.purevolume.com/jeffhx

Pretty good but you should have called it "I Ghosted a Murder Witness"

lol ironically i did think of that..but iwent kinda confused..so i stuck with that..i like the sound fx..the 'intervals' of the rain adds some form of effect i reckon..