I like the rhythm guitar's tone on Red Kite quite a bit. I think you were going for a more dramatic and melodic song with "Red Kite," however the phrasing just left me confused. It really didn't seem like I was progressing towards anything and most of the notes seemed to just be a technical filler for the progression, I recommend studying or practicing a little more on your composition ( however this is just my opinion ). Good chops though!
Peace.
-Kole (Kyle Hicks)
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Composer, Guitarist, Instructor.
http://www.KoleMusician.com
http://www.myspace.com/kolemusic
Composer, Guitarist, Instructor.