I Gots A New Epic Song Up!


sheepy770
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04/15/2006 4:55 pm
hey ive jst finnished a brand new peice for my music exam-

CLICK HERE TO LISTEN!!!!

its called "run to hide", any comments wud be greatly appreciated as yet again the marks i get form this go towards my final grade!

enjoy, and thanks in advance!
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Alpha Keuhard
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04/16/2006 6:05 am
Not the kind of stuff I listen to... I dont find it very appealing at all.
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04/16/2006 12:45 pm
well this isnt a good start....lmao
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04/17/2006 1:33 am
well, i agree with alpha in that its not my normal cup of tea. (not into emo music so much.) but the thing is, it mixes a couple genres- its not hardcore anything and i respect that. i actually found it very nice to listen to- some nice shredding in there.

nice harmonies in both guitars and with the keyboard. the piano added alot to it.

good recording overall- keep it up, sheepy!
JK :cool:

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04/17/2006 3:45 am
I really liked it, very unique approach. The guitar, piano, drums and everything were really well done. My only criticism, is that some of the parts seemed like they needed "vocals," or a more distinguished lead. Unless you were trying to have the harmony carry the song ( then it worked perfectly fine. ) Peace and keep up the good work.
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04/17/2006 11:26 pm
That was really good, well done! It isn't the style of music I usually listen to, but you really gave 'er all she had, and it turned out not only to be tastefully-composed and well-structured, but colourful with an original touch. The lead at the beginning was perhaps a little loud, but it managed to mesh quite well into the mix with the keyboards for the rest of the piece. I think you ought to get quite a good mark. :)
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04/20/2006 1:45 am
Great tone for starts. I'm guessing it was a bitch to record. Definately needs singing. It's a change from my normal listening zone, but is extremely well produced and played.
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05/16/2006 8:19 pm
hey thanks for the reviews!

this is just a wee note to say that on that link page ive put up a vid of me improvising a solo!


keep the comments comin!


peace, sheepy
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05/17/2006 4:26 am
That was a nice solo, very well-coordinated for an improvisation. I have to say, you're one of the few shredders I know of who has a decent bending technique. :cool:
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05/17/2006 3:44 pm
excellent :cool: period.
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05/17/2006 5:04 pm
i could tell that you are a good arranger of sounds but it just didnt move me.
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08/12/2006 12:22 pm
bump

should be puttin new tracks up soon:D If i can get tht little extra time, hehe


any more comments would mean a lot:D

cheers, sheepyuk
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08/12/2006 5:04 pm
I think you've done a good job. It has a Vai meets Moby kinda vibe. ;)


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