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z0s0_jp
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z0s0_jp
Riffologist
Joined: 07/08/05
Posts: 1,584
04/12/2006 9:13 pm
Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonPerhaps show him this thread.

These lyrics are pretty awful, I'll say now that I know they're not yours. I held back because I didn't want to make you feel terrible.

Oh, and when he says "A LITTLE DOWN" in the demon voice, I want to shoot myself out of embarassment for him. PS, this is a song about a ****ing vibrator, so it should at least be funny. "Pleasure and pain/Love's hateful reign" Simply horrendous. I hope this is supposed to be a joke song, because then all it failed at was being funny. If it's serious, it failed at being poetic and even half decent. Lyrically I mean. The band's not bad. You guys could have radio play if your singer wrote better melodies and lyrics.

thanks jolly for your input, i think he was trying to be silly and let the listener think it was serious....@#$$ i don't know. with the other songs on the cd it does not fit at all. he has a frank zappa fetish i think :rolleyes:
"Dammit Jim!! I'm a guitarist not a roadie...so haul my gear"